I have this
novel in mind. An entire story,
fantastic for sure, but a distillation and mediation on pain and loss. Occasionally a few pieces of the
writing will be shared here, for input and creative criticism. I look forwarded to hearing your thoughts.
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Straight overhead was a
light blue. Framed by the green of the high treetops and their strong
woody branches, the streaks of the thin clouds move from somewhere behind to somewhere
else. The sun was barely hidden behind the wisps, its waning energies
diffused to a soft orange, able to be seen, yet only suggestions of the power
from which it came. This was a beautiful sunset, but beautiful to someone
else. This one was painted for another
man, not Gordie.
Below
that celestial painting was an outcropping of eroded rock on top of a seemingly
inconsequential hill. This was not the highest hill in the region, nor
did it have any other fantastic features.
The forest receded back from its ledge some twenty paces. And this last leg of the pilgrimage to
adulthood had been made by Gordie a few hours previous. Three nights ago he
had left his most recent home. He set
out to, as the community called it, Watch the Wheel. It’s a passage to adulthood, like many
cultures have. A young man is ready to cast off his youth and move to
independence, and he does it through an effort and a journey. Each young man is sent to the far river and
to this very rock ledge. That’s it.
It’s simple. Just go there. And the journey will take care of everything
else.